Ellen Lee Week 6 Analysis

What I added to my writing was a different perspective. I personified the colors, but I go on and off, depending on what number it is. I made it more personal, and how these colors affect my life and my personality. Of course, I feel like I'm made up of more than those two colors, but I wanted to emphasize the main part about me, what I feel, and those colors physically and metaphorically change my life. I go into a bit of a story, which is also what I added, because in my previous one, I listed everything that I felt was pink and black. (Basically, I added depth, story, and a slightly different perspective in my list).